Going shopping
A friend invited me to go shopping after daytime work, he drove me to Laifushi shopping mall near to Dongzhimen. We mainly looked some T-shirts because Summer is comming in Beijing, after 2-hours' selection, he bought a T-shirt of Zara and I bought a pair of slippers, we had supper in the shopping mall, then I came back home in a hurry because I have booked a chat with a friend.
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Good stuff. Re previous comment, try to write with shorter sentences rather than one long sentence.
Henry
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Going shopping
A friend invited me to go shopping after work. He drove me to Laifushi shopping mall near Dongzhimen. We mainly looked at T-shirts because Summer is coming in Beijing. After 2 hours selection, he bought a 'Zara' T-shirt and I bought a pair of slippers. We had supper in the shopping mall, then I came back home in a hurry because I had booked a chat with a friend.
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