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Smoking in public places Smoking in public places should be banned for these reasons. First of all, smoking has negative effects on not only direct smoker but also surrounding people. Research indicates that the passive smokers enhale 70% of smoke, only 10% enters the smoker's respiratory system and the remaining 20% stay in air. For instance, if a man smokes 10 cigraretes a day, he will impact 8 others around with effects like him. Further more, smoking causes many respirotory diseases. Breathing smoke, you will be coughing and feel stuffy. Specially, smoke í the main reason for lung cancer. In conclusion, it is advisable that smoking in public places should be abolished.

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Smoking in public places

Smoking in public places should be banned for these --> the following/many reasons. First of all, smoking has negative effects on not only direct smoker --> not only on the active smoker, but also on the surrounding people. Research indicates that the passive smokers enhale 70% of smoke, only 10% enters the smoker's respiratory system and the remaining 20% stay in air. For instance, if a man smokes 10 cigraretes a day, he will impact 8 others around with effects like him. Furthermore (one word), smoking causes many respirotory --> respiratory diseases. Breathing smoke, you will be coughing and feel stuffy. Specially, smoke í --> Smoke in particular is the main reason for lung cancer. In conclusion, it is advisable that smoking in public places should be abolished.

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association of anti-smoking!
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I'm completely agree with your opinion. Here is forbidden to smoke in pubblic places but this norm don't find a serius application.

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