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my best friend Hi! I write about my best friend. Her name is Nadegda! We meet when I study in college and at first we didn’t communicated. I thought, she very boring and rood. One day we speak …and didn’t stop. We talk, talk…I understood that we have much in common!!! At this time we have spent free time together and became the best friend! She is a wonderful person but she very lonely (I mean about boyfriend)! I tried help but I not do that….How I wish that she will happy!!!

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my best friend

Hi! I write about my best friend. Her name is Nadegda! We meet met when I study studied in at college and at first we didn’t communicated. I thought, she is very boring and rood rude. One day we speak spoke…and didn’t stop. We talked and talked…I understood that we have much in common!!! At this time we have spent free time together and became the best friend! Now we spend a lot of free time together and have become the best of friends! She is a wonderful person but she is very lonely (I mean about her boyfriend)! I tried to help but I can not do that….How I wish that she will would be happy!!!

you can say, "we met at college", and leave out "when I studied" - if you are still in college.
didn't communicate - "did" makes phrase past tense, so there is no need for the 'd' on the end of "communicate"
can not, or cannot - either is good.
wish would be - since it is a wish and not a fact, you need to use "would be" instead of "will be".
"have become" - because you are still best friends, at this time.


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