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Never give up, never lose hope Most adult are envy of these children's life and often miss their childhood, it's a naïve and purely times. No trouble and no fret. They can do what they wants, as we get older, we will found life are not as good as we thought. There are many unexpected things surround us, what results were always beyond our imagination. Then how to handle these things well? Different people have different opinion? I think the most important is keep optimistic attitude for all things.Never give up, never lose hope. These successful men who are not success when he was born, before his achievement, he must suffered many failures and difficult which ordinary people can't bear it. During the process, these great obstacles often hamper your thought or action, which let people get frustrate and discourage easily. So we don't exclude they have idea to given up, But finally, they overcome all these kinds of difficult and obtained success. By contrast, these unsuccessful men who just know to grumble all day long, and they grumble the society, grumble their parents except for themselves. What they blamed should not for these additional things but themselves. Perseverance and endurance is our necessity subject in our life. We must learn it well. But some people failed to pass the text until they are dead. It is a miserable thing. Through fair and foul, we must never give up and lose hope for everything. When you recall these kinds of things while you are getting older, you will feel your life is colorful and rewarding. Perhaps you can sort out and edit a story to you son or grandson, ^_^^_^, They will benefit a lot form it.

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Never give up, never lose hope

Most adults are envious of these a children's life and often miss their childhood, it's a naïve and pure ly time s. No trouble and no fretting (better - no troubles and no worries). They can do what they want s.  As we get older, we will found find that life are is not as good as we thought. There are many unexpected things which surround us, what with results were always beyond our imagination. Then how do we  to handle these things well?
Different people have different opinions? I think the most important is to keep an optimistic attitude for all things.Never give up, never lose hope.

These successful men who are were not successful when he was they were born. Before his their achievement, they he must have suffered many failures and difficulties  which ordinary people can't bear it. During the process, these great obstacles often hamper your thoughts or actions, which let people get easily frustrated and discouraged easily. So we don't exclude they have idea They may want to give n up, but finally, they overcome all these kinds of difficulties  and obtain ed success.

By contrast, these unsuccessful men who just know to grumble all day long.  and They grumble the about society,  grumble about their parents and grumble about everything  except for themselves. What they blamed should blame are not for these additional things but themselves.
Perseverance and endurance are  is our necessary  subject in our life. We must learn it them well. But some people failed to pass the test until they are dead.
It is a miserable thing.

Through fair and foul, we must never give up and lose hope for everything.
When you recall these kinds of things while you are getting older, you will feel your life is colorful and rewarding.
Perhaps you can sort out and edit a story to you son or grandson, ^_^^_^,
They will benefit a lot from it.

very good this is a complicated story you are writing.  Be careful about singular and plural - the verb has to be the same as the subject.  men were /    a man was / they have  / he has/ life is / lives are

sorry I haven't checked in - I had a VERY crazy week

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