A Boy
Tow months ago，I met a boy who tall，white，handsome and nice. He is a good boy. He treat me like his little sister，so I thought I fall in love with him.But the day before yesterday, I found that he lose his temper over an old man. I really don't like his behaviour.
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Thank you for above friends‘ suggestions.Perhaps he has a bad character.
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Why did he lose his temper? Perhaps he had a good reason.
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In American culture, you probably don't want to say that a person is "white" as a way of saying he's handsome. "White" in the U.S. usually means "not African-American," so people will think you're prejudiced against African-Americans. It would be more acceptable to say that the person is "fair-skinned."
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But the day before yesterday, I found that he lose lost his temper over with an old man.
Losing his temper over X means that he's angry because of X: John lost his temper over the bad food in the restaurant.
Losing his temper with X means that he's angry with the person X: John lost his temper with the waiter in the restaurant.
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A Boy
Two months ago，I met a boy who is tall，white，handsome, and nice. He is a good boy. He treats me like his little sister，so I thought I might fall in love with him.But the day before yesterday, I found out that he lost his temper over an old man. I really didn't like his behaviour.
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