write about today

Today I had a body check . About Chest X-ra,vision,Blood test and so on.The bad thing happened on blood test .The young nurse can't find my blood vessel.so she was trying again and again .This only what I can feel it ,my blood vessel burst.I was crying , make me feel shy and upset .
Maybe it is time to keep fit .

X-ray

Having good health is rather important. Fighing.

write about today

Today I had a body check . About Chest X-ray,vision,blood test and so on.
The bad thing happened on the blood test .

The young nurse couldn't find my blood vessel. (Blood vessel is often only called 'a vein'.)

so She was tried again and again .

This only what I can feel it ,my blood vessel burst. (I'm not quite sure what you meant with this. Maybe: 'The only thing I felt was my blood vessel bursting')

I was crying and make me felt shy and upset .
Maybe it is time to keep fit .