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Weather It was sunny so I planed to go and to have lunch in the park near my house with my family. I thought it was great to have lunch under the beautiful blue sky! I went to supermarket to buy bread due to eat it in the park. After that , I went out supermarket, Suddenly it was starting raining cats and dogs !! And it also hailed. So unfortunately I had to give up to go to the park and had to go back home. I thought I should have an fording unbrella when I go out , because it often change weather in the spring.

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Weather

It was sunny, so I planned to go and to have lunch in the park near my house with my family.
I thought it was great to have lunch under the beautiful blue sky!
I went to the supermarket to buy bread due to so we could eat it in the park.
After that, I went out left the supermarket. 
Suddenly it was starting started raining cats and dogs!
And it also even hailed! 
So unfortunately I had to give up to go going to the park, and I had to go back home. ("Head back home" also works very well here. ^^)
I thought; I should have an fording folding umbrella when I go out, because it often change the weather changes so often in the spring.

What a wonderful story! I really enjoyed reading it! ^^ Hopefully the weather becomes nicer, so that you can try having a picnic in the park with your family again! I hope this helped you!

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