A story in barber shop
i went to barber shop at moon，sleepy and thirty. But there were a long queue waiting for their turn. i felt despaired. At that moment, a haircuts came to me with a smile,then i took out my vip card . funturely, i was served immediately.
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A story in barber shop
I went to the barber shop at noon feeling sleepy and (thirsty?) but there were a long queue of people waiting for their turn. I felt despaired disheartened. At that moment, a haircuts hairdresser came to me with a smile,then I took out my VIP card . Funturely, I was served immediately.
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