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The girl caught my eye There are a lot of funny things in my campus life. Once, I went to a big classroom in the no.3 teaching building locating in south of my school for a elective course. When I went into the classroom ,I found that there were less than 10 students in and I chose one seat far away from the platform .After a while , I saw a girl wearing a bright-coloured skirt breezing in, her outfit was really terrific . To my pleasant surprise ,she walked toward the side of me and sat behind my right shoulder. At the moment , I sure I can smell the slight fragrance of her ,so I cannot help myself to glanced at her out of the corner of my eye. She was reading a thick book seriously and unaware of me. Her eyes are so beautiful and she has great shape and pink elastic skin, what a gorgeous girl . I told to myself : it must be a god hint, I should do something! So I torn a sheet of paper off from my note book and wrote down : “You are so beautiful , may I have your name” . Then turned back my head and put the paper on the table in front of her. She raised her head and looked at me with a start then immediately reacted. About one minute later. I turned back again and founded that the paper still there, but I could see some words that she had written on it .I got it back with a bit of excitement. What she had written on it is : You look not bad too , but I have a boyfriend. Then I wrote back : Do you want one more ? She replied : No ,thanks !

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No~~, my English is really poor,I wrote it by using a electronic desktop dictionary called Youdao dict. I really hope that some native English speakers like you can give me some help , I will appreciate it very much ...
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Aww,kawaii~ I think you two could be friends at least.But I didnt see any corrections that needed to be made.You have good English though besides afew spaces you didnt need.

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