other's country The issue that university student should learn one more course about culture of another foreign country has been an intriguing problem, some people deem that student merely learn one c

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other's country The issue that university student should learn one more course about culture of another foreign country has been an intriguing problem, some people deem that student merely learn one course, but other people maintain that student should learn one more course about culture of another foreign country, for my part, I am more inclined to latter. First of all, university student can make more friends from around the world. Because if a person which know many knowledge about culture of another foreign, like that people will easier to speak with other from around the world. I takes my sister as an example, which she is a undergraduate, she learn many knowledge about culture of another foreign in idle time, just for this reason, she makes many friend such Spaniard, American and so on, now, whether she travel in Canada or American does not feel loneliness, to sum up, university student should learn one more course about culture of another foreign country. Secondly, university student can more job opportunities. Generally speaking, boss is fond of people which wide knowledge, because such are benefits for firm. People can help boss get a good impression in public, a people which have many knowledge about culture of another foreign can get more chance to speak or introduction own. People can keep a favorable position to get job. In a word, university student should learn one more course about culture of another foreign country. There is no doubt that university student learn one more course about culture of another foreign country is waste time, because people maybe needn’t these knowledge in the future. However, people can to enrich themselves, and can get too much benefits, such as traveling around the world. Above what I said, university student should learn one more course about culture of another foreign country, because around the world are gradually merged into one, we need to understand more of the culture of other countries,

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The issue that university students should learn one more course about culture of foreign countries has been an intriguing one problem (it's not really a 'problem'). Some people deem believe that students should merely learn about their own country one course but other people maintain that students should learn one more course about the culture of another a foreign country. For my part, I am more inclined to say the latter.

First of all, university students can make more friends from around the world because if when a person which knows many knowledge about the culture of another foreign other countries, like that people will be easier to speak with other from around the world it is easier to speak to people from around the world. I takes Using my sister as an example, which she is an undergraduate and she learns many knowledge a lot about culture of another foreign other cultures in idle her spare time. Just for this reason Because of this, she makes she has made many friends such as Spaniards, Americans and so on. Now whether if she travels in to/around Canada or American does not feel loneliness she is not lonely. To sum up, university students should learn one more course about culture of another foreign country more about other cultures. (not a very good paragraph ending, doesn't relate to topic of the paragraph - 'learning about other cultures has enabled my sister to travel more freely around the world')

Secondly, university students can more job opportunities learning about other cultures gives university students more job opportunities. Generally speaking, boss is employers are fond of people which with wide knowledge because such are benefits for firm it is beneficial for their company. People can help boss get a good impression in public, a people which have many knowledge about culture of another foreign can get more chance to speak or introduction own. People can keep a favorable position to get job. In a word, university student should learn one more course about culture of another foreign country. (Doesn't really make sense. It would be better to talk about the benefits that a company receives for employing people who are knowledgeable about the world. For example, international connections, better relations with clients etc.)

There is no doubt that university students learn one more course about culture of another foreign country is waste time, because people maybe needn’t these knowledge in the future. There is no doubt that university students who learn about cultures of other countries are wasting their time because they might not need this knowledge in the future. (pretty unrealistic view just in my own opinion). However, people can to enrich themselves and can get too much other benefits, such as traveling around the world.

Above what I saidIn conclusion, university students should learn one more course about cultures of another foreign countries because around the world are gradually merged into one people are becoming more connected around the world and therefore we need to understand more of about the cultures of other countries.

NOTES:

- revise conjugation of 3rd person singular. I travel -> she travels.

- keep your sentences shorter, make sure to use '.' more often.

- maybe stay away from idioms until you become more familiar with how they are used in native texts.

- remember to use the plural when needed (eg. university students)

- not too sure what you mean by 'one course'. It's better to talk more general, such as learning about culture.

- 'foreign' is an adjective. You can't say 'learn more about a foreign'. You must say 'learn more about a foreign country/culture'.

- in terms of Academic English, you need to practice the structure of essays more. Generally, paragraphs should start with an opening statement on what you will discuss in this paragraph. The 'body' of the paragraph is used to explain this statement using examples and evidence and then your final sentence should restate your opinion and link it back to the overall argument (must be specific and not just a general statement resaid every paragraph).

- if your aim is sounding native when talking, feel free to use 'secondly', 'in conclusion' etc. However if this is an academic piece you should try not to use these unnecssary filler words. You should also try not to use first person (eg. I believe...) when writing an academic piece.

Hope that helps.

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