First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hi,everyone ,I'm a new one here, enter this family just want to improve my englis,because my job is international trade, so I need to speak and write very fluently engish,please help me and thank you advanced.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hi everyone, I'm a newbie here. I joined this family just wanting to improve my English because my job is in international trade. I need to speak and write English very fluently. Please help me and thank you in advance.Hi, welcome! :)
Couple of suggestions:
- use short sentences. Very long sentences, even from skilled English writers, are difficult to read.
- be aware of capital letters (always a capital for English, for example), and follow punctuation marks with a space. Use punctuation sparingly: if the sentence still makes sense without all those commas, then you don't really need them.
- I used "newbie" even though it's a bit casual. If you want to be more polite, "I'm new here" is perfect.
- "Thank you in advance" is the phrase you need. "Advanced" means highly developed.
Hope this helps!
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