it's a hot day
last night,i have to give something to my friend.
so i took bus to her place.
on the way ,it was raining, it's like a rainstorm.
fortunately,i bring a umbrella
when i got back it was 10:30 pm,too late and i was so tired.
it's still too hot like a suana , even it has rained.
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I suggest you rewrite your article，because：
1. You translate directly from Chinese sentence，it is too lazy.
2. I found some obvious errors，I think you will notice them too，if you read again.
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i hope today is better
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