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1. Justin has established a new department in order to match coming drained a coal resource.
2. Because of that Thailand’s drainage system was not good made huge flood all over the country.
3. Achemed has been invited the commemoration of the puppet festival in 2012.
4. We need to forge a better relationship with their Asian neighbor in order to make tighten exchanging the information about education how to make children enter Harvard University.
5. The little boy are ready to carry out his threat to turning off computer power while his older sister are doing her report if she don’t admit what her new boyfriend who made Game CD of young boy’s playstation 3 being serious damaged.
6. She never admitted a fault, he just cried and when the little boy saw his remainder in the account to buy new CD, he’d cried again.
7. The little boy posted a memo that was written “Nobody touch this!!!! as Spanish” to Game CD.
8. When older sister see that memo, she said give him an advice needing to be changed from Spanish to English to make a memo a readability. Because her boyfriend doesn’t know Spanish.
9. The little boy wrote a parenthetical expression on the memo “You finally admitted your fault!”
10. The little boy achmed, have her iphone hided, then he announced that “Your free to contact your boy friend Jeff is restrictive from now on as my statement.”
11. She suggests that she has him improve his school score in order to get him maximization of an increment pocket money, and she said “that is selling Playstation3 through E-bay.”
12. He was terrified of losing playstation3, so he send a kakaotalk message to his mother for applying a refugee with dealing her iphone.
13. His mother thought that it need to be disciplined over the conflict of little boy achmed and older sister abi. She called to her husband, but he contradicted flatly and said “that is just common, so we don’t need to be in there”.
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Hey Ryan, I've just submitted a correction. Did you mean Korea has to forge better relationships with its Asian neighbors? Because that's how I corrected number 4. If you meant something else do let me know so I can give you a proper correction (:
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I’ve made a sentence. Please kindly check this.
I’ve made a sentence. Please kindly check this.
1. Justin has established a new department in order to overcome the coming drainage of coal resources.
2. Because of Thailand’s poor drainage system, huge floods happened all over the country.
3. Achemed has been invited to the commemoration of the 2012 Puppet Festival.
4. We need to forge better relationships with our Asian neighbors in order to heighten the exchange of information regarding education, such as how to enable our children to enter Harvard University.
5. The little boy was ready to carry out his threat of cutting off the computer's power while his older sister was still doing her report on it, if she did not admit that her current boyfriend seriously damaged his playstation 3 Game CD.
6. She never admitted the fault, so he cried. When the little boy saw his remaining account balance to buy a new CD, he cried again.
7. The little boy posted a memo that said, “(in Spanish) Nobody touch this!!!!” on his Game CD.
8. When his older sister saw the memo, she gave him advice that the memo needed to be changed from Spanish to English for readability's sake. This was because her boyfriend didn't know any Spanish.
9. The little boy wrote a parenthetical expression on the memo, “You finally admitted your fault!”
10. The little boy, Achmed, had his sister's iphone hid, then announced, “Your freedom to contact your boyfriend Jeff is restricted from now on, as of this statement.”
11. She suggested that she'll help him improve his school scores in order to get him a maximum increment of pocket money, and she also said, “I would sell Playstation3 through E-bay.”
12. He was terrified of losing his playstation3, so he sent a kakaotalk message to his mother, to seek refuge for dealing with his sister's iphone.
13. His mother thought that discipline was needed to deal with the conflict of her little boy, Achmed and his older sister, Abi. She told her husband, but he contradicted flatly by saying, “That is just something common, so we don’t need to meddle in it.”
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