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In Komazawa Park I went to Komazawa Park in Tokyo with my family today. Komazawa Park is very big and it has some sports stadiums,running courses and cycling courses. We rode a unipue bicycle which is named family bicycle. It has four tires,two handlebars and it can take 5 persons. That was very exiting!! I would like to go there again.

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In Komazawa Park

I went to Komazawa Park in Tokyo with my family today.
Komazawa Park is very big and it has some sports stadiums,running courses and cycling courses.
We rode a unipue bicycle which is named family bicycle.
It has four tires,two handlebars and it can take 5 persons (although technically correct, we use "people").
That was very exciting!!
I would like to go there again.

 

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