Morogoro
Morogoro is my hometown, is the place where my father come from. I never been in there till I was teen, I always heard stories about it, that it is beautiful, lots of river, many trees, national parks like(Mikumi, Udzungwa mountain forest).
In 2009 me and my young my brother went to visit our Grandma, so taht was the my first time to see Simba(Lion), Tembo(Elephant) and many other wild animals.
Our travel was enjoyable on the road because we saw many things ever before untill we reach to our grandma, the people were so kind and socialist. we enjoyed to be there.
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Morogoro
Morogoro is my hometown; it is the place where my father came from. I had never been there until I was a teen, I always heard stories about it, that it was beautiful, with lots of rivers, many trees, and national parks like(Mikumi, Udzungwa mountain forest).
In 2009 my younger brother and I went to visit our Grandma, so that was my first time seeing Simba(Lion), Tembo(Elephant) and many other wild animals.
Our travel was enjoyable on the road because we saw many things even before we reached our grandma; the people were so kind and socialist. (if you mean they were friendly, it'll be social) Socialist is a political movement) We enjoyed being there.
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Thank you Ben!!
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This is very well written, Matt. I think your English has become much better than A2 (Elementary) on the CEFR scale. Margaret has done a very good job with corrections, so I don't have too much to add, except that I would say "our trip" rather than "our travel." How about writing us another notebook entry about your grandmother?
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