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I love my pets

Are Do U have pets?
I have 2 dogs.
first dog  One calls Cine. It means Park's Family.(Cine means Family in koreaKorean)
My brother's friend gave me Cine in my birthday.(8years ago)
Cine is my first pet. So I have to know about pet raising.
Cine is from germany, shunauzer species of dog.

Cine is a shunauzer from Germany.
Second another one calls Mone.
Mone was threw away from by ex-host.
My mom heard about that. so she brought adopted Mone immediately.
Mone is a Maltese from France.
Mone is really lovely but she didn't dont't believe others.
she had been hurt before,so now she believes me only.
when she comes came to our house, Cine did some strange behaviors. Maybe he felt some stress.
He licking his paws everytime and barking(what does you mean).

Eventhough he gained weight.
Mone also gained weight and healthier than before.
How can I raise my pets more wise?

I love my pets

Are U Do you have pets?
I have 2 dogs.
My first dog is named calls Cine. It means "Park's Family" .(Cine means family in Korea).
My brother's friend gave me Cine on my birthday.(8years ago).
Cine was my first pet. So I had to get to know about pet raising.
Cine is from Germany, and belongs to the Schnauzer species ofdog.
The second one is named calls Mone.
Mone was being thrown away from by its ex-host.
My mom heard about that and she brought Mone immediately.
Mone is from France, she belongs to the Maltese species ofdog.
Mone is really lovely, but she didn't believe others.
She believes only me, because of his wounded heart.
When she comes came to our house, Cine appeared to have a strange movement. Maybe because he feels deeply stressed.
He is licking his paws everytime and barks. Eventhough he gains his weight back.
Mone also gained her weight and is now as healthy than as before.
How can I raise my pets wisely?