Do I Miss You?
I have all: a husband that loves me, three beautiful, intelligent and successful children, a house, my mom, friends, a work that I adore and we are healthy thus what's is missing in my life? You? If You exist, I am not sure I want You in my life, it seems there are only problems when You are around.
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Do I Miss You?
I have all everything: a husband that who loves me, three beautiful, intelligent and successful children, a house, my mom, friends, a work job that I adore and we are healthy thus what's what is missing in my life? You? If You exist, I am not sure I want You in my life, it seems there are only problems when You are around.
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Do I Miss You?
Hi Elisa, fastlingo and cocpop have made the corrections! .......SO is correct here, not THUS (=therefor). .........Use of I've, What's, I'm etc is best kept for speech or reported speech. ......When writing, it is better to use the full words - I have, what is, I am
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Do I Miss You?
I have everything: a husband who loves me, three beautiful, intelligent and successful children, a house, my mom, friends, a job that I adore and we're healthy, so what's is missing in my life? You? If You exist, I am not sure I want You in my life, it seems there are only problems when You are around.
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@ Jura, you solved the mystery - the essays refers to your first guess.
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It's a mystery to me. Either you long for God in your life or a lover:))
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