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My birthday Yesterday it was my birthday. I was 23 years old. I spent a normal day, I had no a party. I only went out with my frends and I offerd them something in the end of night. They gave me a present, a coupon with which I can buy a article of clothing from a shop. It was a nice night. I had fun. I saw back the girl that I like her. I was very good, altrought I don't like the birthdays because it makes me feel old. This is why I'm 23 and I don't still get a girl.

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My birthday

Yesterday it was my birthday and I am now 23 years old. I spent a normal day without a party. I only went out with my friends and I offered them something at the end of night. They gave me a present, a coupon with which I can buy any article of clothing from a shop. It was a nice night. I had fun. I saw the girl that I like again. It was all very good, although I don't like birthdays because they make me feel old. This is why  I still can't get a girl even if I'm already 23.

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My birthday

Yesterday it was my birthday. I was 23 years old. I spent a normal day, I had no a party. I only went out with my frends and I offerd them something in the end of night. They gave me a present, a coupon with which I can buy a article of clothing from a shop. It was a nice night. I had fun. I saw back the girl that I like her. I was very good, alt troughI don't like the birthdays because it makes me feel old. This is why I'm 23 and I don't still get a girl.

 

 

 

My birthday

Yesterday was my birthday and I turned 23 years old. I spent my day as usual and did not have a party. I only wen out with my friends and offered them something at the end of the night. They gave me a present, a coupon I can use to buy an item of clothing at a shop. I saw the girl that I like and I had a good time, although I don't like birthdays because they make me feel old. This is why I can't get a girl even though I am 23 years old.

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Happy birthday! Don't worry and be yourself, and then girls come. That's what I tell myself(for me it'd be boys of course.)
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Thank you for wishes :)
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Happy Birthday! :)

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