Your english already seems pretty good, at least written. If you don't mind I would phrase your paragraph like this "In China, being able to speak, understand, read and write english is becoming the most decisive factor for acheiving a higher education and obtaining a better job. As we all know, the "made in China" fever has created billions of GPA and millions of jobs. But the global economy and industry consistently requires the addition of more talent/language diversity. For me, english can be an intimidating language to learn. I hope you can help me! :) I think learning any second language can be a challenge, but you have many tools that can help you, including websites such as this, public places where foreigners meet, formal classes if required, and many other things. I know, because I have been trying to become fluent in Mandarin, and even though I am still far from being fluent, I have made a lot of progress. I have made several trips to China, made many friends that I talk with on SKYPE, or through E Mail, studies online courses, hired a tutor, listen to chinese songs, watch chinese movies and so on, so on. My point is this, you have to take a step by step approach, learn the basic words/structure, then build on them. I know for me, when I was in China, every opportunity I had to speak chinese, I did. Even when I had the words wrong, that did not stop me. Also, you have to be patient, and you have to make it fun. The fun part for me is listening to chinese songs by S.H.E or A Mei, and trying to read the words and sing the song as it is playing. Or watching a good movie, then learning becomes enjoyment. I use to joke, that if I was in China, and I could meet a person, ask her what her hobbies are, take her on a date, and have a great evening, all in Chinese, then I have made progress :) I am sure you will learn, just take it one step at a time.