First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello my friends. I am form the coastal city. It's Qingdao in China. I like making friends and I am looking forward to become a friend with of yours. I hope that we can learn from each other. Qingdao is a very beautiful city. So you can come and visit the city and I can be your tour guide. I hope we can have a good time.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello, my friends. I am from a coastal city. It's Qingdao in China. I like making friends so I look forward to befriending you. I hope that we can learn from each other. Qingdao is a very beautiful city. So if you can, come visit. I can be your guide. I hope that we will have a good time.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello, my friends. I am from the coastal city . It's Qingdao in China. I like making friends and I am looking forward to become a friend with all of you. I hope that we can learn from each other. Qingdao is a very beautiful city. So you can visit the city and I will be your guide. I hope we  have a good time !