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Letter D Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Eric Lee. I have just finished the trip booked from the agency. Before my departure, What I expected was a joyful vacation, unfortunately, there was no joy but problems happend in my trip, and I am writting to complain about it. To make a long story short, first, you have said to me that the car of Sunshine Hotel would wait for me when I arrived at the airport, but the fact was that I waited it for more than 30 minutes. Second, I did told that the hotel I will be staying should be close to Palm Beach, in fact, I had to take a cab to get there. Last but not the least, my outbound flight was delayed, and no one had told me that at all. Although I am really discotented with what happend, I still want to make some recommendations, warnings are more exact. Doing business honestly, serving client attentively and sincerely, and completing a work correctly and efficiently. Hope you could considerate seriously. Yours faithfully, Eric Lee

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Letter D

Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Eric Lee. I have just finished the trip I booked from the with your agency. Before my departure, What I was expecting was a joyful vacation. Unfortunately, there was no joy but problems, happened in my trip and I am writting to complain about it.

To make a long story short, First, you have said to me I was told that the car of Sunshine Hotel would wait for me when I arrived at the airport.  but The fact was that I waited it for more than 30 minutes. Second, I did told requested that the hotel I will be staying should be close to Palm Beach, in fact, I had to take a cab to get there. Last but not the least, my outbound flight was delayed and no one had told me that   I was not notified at all.
Although  I am really discontented with what happened.  I still want to make some recommendations, warnings are more to be exact. Doing business honestly, serve the client attentively and sincerely, and complete work correctly and efficiently.

I Hope you could will consider this seriously.

Yours faithfully,

Eric Lee

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哈哈,楼上的,不好意思,我们在写考试作文。这个不是真实情况。
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现在的确有好多旅行社的服务质量很差,除了伙食差,住宿一般,导游和当地商贩合伙坑游客的钱。。。。也许风气如此,大家也只能自认倒霉了。
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恩,是这么回事儿。
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还有,题目让你自我介绍,“My name is Eric Lee.”不是他所希望看到的,因为你信的结尾是有这句话的。他是希望看到你跟旅游中介的关系。

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