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Battle of the Sound (Part 2) The show is done. I can’t wait to see Blake. I really want to know how the show is. I hope it runs very well. “There he is.” whisper me. I see him walk away from me and I know he stills mad at me. I follow him at the edge of the road near to the sidewalk so that I can speak to him. I open the car window and call him. “Blake! I just wanna say I’m sorry. I know I was wrong. Don’t be like that. Come on!”said me. Blake still ignores me. This cannot be, I must do something. “Blake, I just want to tell you, there are ‘Delights’ besides me. Don’t you wanna try some?”trying to persuade him. ‘Delights’ is actually our favorite cake. Every year when we want to celebrate our birthday, I am going to buy him a cake and so do him. His favorite is Chocolate and mine is Chocolate Blueberry. Suddenly, he run to my car and open the door. He is trying to search for the cake. I quickly close the door and speed up the car. “Where’s the cake?” ask Blake. “Damn! There is no cake. I can’t believe I can be cheat as easy as that.” mutter Blake. “Yup there is none but I’m going to buy one.” said me. On our way to the ‘Delights’ shop, suddenly something makes our car imbalance. Then, my car lost control and hit the divider. From that moment, I do not know what happen next. What happen to Blake, what happen to me, everything become blurs. After that, I feel something lifting me and bring us to somewhere. I cannot see very clear that time and my head are totally painful. Later, I wake up. My hands and legs were tied. I cannot move and I cannot see a single thing. “Where the hell I am? Blake! Where are you? Anybody here?” shout me. Then, the lights are on. I can see not just Blake, Sam, Lizzy and Taylor also here. They are all unconscious. I am so lost. What happen here? Why we are all here? Is this some kind of prank? Then, one by one, Blake, Sam, Lizzy and Taylor wake up. Suddenly, there is a screen comes out from the wall together with the voice of a woman.

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The story is quite long, but since italki only let me post only 3 entry per day, there's nothing much i can do. Hope you guys wait and read for the rest of the story.

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