First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I`m am student of MIPT in Moscow. My profile includes programming and mathematics. I am also interested in game development and 3D graphics. Also I play guitar. Actually, not very well. I want to learn English especially because of my work with programming. In the future, I`d like to work at the company "Valve", but I`m only a 2nd year student. Sooo, I need to study hard.

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Keep up the good work! I wish you luck in your pursuit of programming and your goal of working in 3D video game development!

P.S. Valve games are awesome. Portal and TF2 for life!

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am student of Moscow Institute of Physyscs and Technology. My profile includes programming and mathematics.I am also interested in game development and 3D graphics. Also I play guitar. Actually, not very well.I wabt to learn English especially because of my work with programming. In the future, I`d like to work at the company "Valve", but I`m only a 2nd year student. Sooo, I need to study hard.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am student of Moscow Institute of Physyscs and Technology in Moscow. My profile includes programming and mathematics.I am also interested in game development and 3D graphics. Also I play guitar. Actually, not very well.I wabt to learn English especially because of my work with programming. In the future, I`d like to work at the company "Valve", but I`m only a 2nd year student. Sooo, I need to study hard.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I`m am stodent at MIPT in Moscow. My specialty is programming and mathematics.  I`m also interested in game development and 3D graphics. I also play guitar, however not very well. I'm learning English for my specialty in programming. In the future, I`d like to work at Valve company. But I`m only a 2nd year student, sooo I need to study hard.

Very good!

You should write out MIPT so that people know what it is. 

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I`m am student of MIPT in Moscow. My profile is programming and mathematics. Also I`m interested in game development and 3D graphics. My hobby is playing guitar. Actually, I do it not very well. Becase of my programming speciality I learn English. In future, I`d like to work in Valve company. But I`m only 2nd year student. Sooo, I need to study hard.