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I was born and grew up ( or I was born and raised ) in the countryside. When I got (to) the University I have to be (live) in the City. I was so astonished. Although I have lived there (I have been living here )for a long time, I haven't adapted myself to circumstances yet. There are many differences between the countryside and the city, not total, there are little similar. (but there are also some similarities)
The city and the countryside are places where we were (are )born, where we grow up, where we spend good and bad times. Every one has many memories to remember there. In the countryside and city, The culture and custom still are (are still )passed from generation to generation.
In economy, there are some differences about labour, job (jobs), awareness and living way (life style). Besides, they are also difference (differences)about society. In my oppinion, the countryside ‘s very peaceful and fresh. Every early morning when I wake up, I can hear the birds singing like the love song (what sounds like a love song), see the first sunlights (sun rays, rays of sunlight) through the leaves, breathe the fresh air, and open my mind for the hope of (hoping for)a beautiful day. I can sit on (in)the yard, look(ing) at (the)stars shinning on (in)the night sky, and dream of a good future. Moreover, people there (yes, there can be used like that, it means "from there") are very friendly, kind and hospitable. They seem to have the warmest heart. They can share any difficulties,(their) happiness,(their) sadness to be together (they can/try to be together)in order to overcome everything. In the city, I can’t see the same ever (but rather the)opposite. Although the city ‘s more developed and moderner(more modern) than the countryside. There are many parks, leisure centres, hospitals and so on for people life (for people's lives/for people to enjoy). However, the city is crowded. The population of the city is increasing day by day. People waste time, lost (and)money for the modern life. They go out for work and after that they go (back)home. So they have no close-knit relationship with everyone (anyone)around them. In (On)the other hand, the city has gotten more and more polluted by industrialization. The air was (is)full of dangerous dust.
In the sumary(To sum up), I prefer living in the countryside to (living in the)city. It’s very peaceful, not more (as)developed (as)than the city yet. But I believe it will get richer and richer someday.
I am not a native English speaker, but I will try to help you a bit until you will get the best corrections.
Help me correct it plz!! Thank you so much!
I was born and grew up / raised in the countryside. When I got the to University I have had to be move in the City. I was so astonished. Although I have been liveding (if you are still living there) there for a long time, I haven't adapted myself to circumstances yet. There are many differences between the countryside and the city, not total, there are a little similar too/ but they also have some little similarities.
The city and the countryside are places where we were born, where we groew up, where we spendt good and bad times, everyone has many memories to remember there. In the countryside and city, the culture and customs are still passed from generation to generation.
In economy, there are some differences about between labours, jobs, awareness and the way of living. Besides, (they are also difference about) the society in these places is different too (sounds a bit better). In my oppinion, the countryside ‘s very peaceful and fresh. Every early morning, when I wake up, I can hear the birds singing something like the a love song, see the first rays of sunlights through the leaves, breathe the fresh air, and open my mind for the hope of a beautiful day. I can sit on in the yard, looking at the stars that are shinning on in the night sky, and dreaming of a good future. Moreover, there people are very friendly, kind and hospitable. They seem to have the warmest heart. They can share any difficulties, happiness, sadness to be being together / being there for one another in order to overcome everything. In the city, I can’t see the same things, ever but always the opposite(or you can say "In the city I can see the opposite"). Although the city ‘s more developed and moderner than the countryside, there are many parks, leisure centres, hospitals and so on for people's life. However, the city is crowded. The population of the city is increasing day by day. People waste time, lost lose/waste money for on the modern life. They go out for to work and after that they go come back (this way sounds better) home. So they have no close-knit relationship with everyone around them. In On the other hand, the city has gotten more and more polluted by industrialization. The air was is full of/ filled with dangerous dust.
(In the sumary)To sum up, I prefer living in the countryside to living in the city. It’s very peaceful, not yet more so developed than like the city, but I believe it will get richer and richer someday.
(My corrections are not perfect, but I hope they helped a little.)
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