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Political Phylosophy when I was younger, I was entirely believing in Socialism, it was really innocent idea to equally distribute wealth among all people and - of course - the state is the only power which can manage the complicated process, but applying that on the land failed, that give a golden chance for the capitalism to spread as it gave the people wealth and comfortable life, years and years capitalism become so wild and rich people gain more profits when poor people gain nothing, so we need to revise our concepts about everything. should we think differently? the answer is "definitely" , why not?

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The problem I'm having with this is that it's sort of repetitive...saying that we should revise our concepts and asking if we should change our thinking is more or less saying the same thing. Does that make sense?
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Oh okay. Like this? "...poor people gain nothing. Is a change in our concepts needed? Yes. I believe we need to revise our concepts about everything. Should we change our thinking? Absolutely."
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thank you kay, that was helpful, but at the end of the paragraph I meant to suggest not ask, "we should think differently" ... for me the answer was "Yes, we should, why not" .... how could it be, correctly? thank you again for your help
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I tried to keep it as close as I could to what I thought you were trying to say.  Forgive me if I misunderstood anything...

Political Philosophy

When I was younger, I wasentirely believing believed entirely in Socialism. It was a really innocent idea to equally distribute wealth among all people, and - of course - the state is the only power which can manage the complicated process. But applying that on idea to the land failed. that give This provided a golden chance for the capitalism to spread, as it gave the people wealth and a comfortable life. For years and years Over time, capitalism become so wild and rich (widespread? wildly successful?) that rich people now gain more unreasonably high profits when while poor people gain nothing. so now Therefore, we need to revise our concepts about everything. Should we think differently? If the answer is "definitely" , why? not

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