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Today, I had an English test. but, I don't didn't get a good score. The test is was not difficult but I had a made so many mistakes. I should have been answered the questions a litte little more carefully, but I didn't do it that. 

Last weekend, I went to Caversham Wildlife Park with my school friends. It There was the a zoo. (I visited a zoo there) I saw many different kinds of animals in Wildlife Park like kangaroos, koalas, many kinds of birds, etc. I wanted to see the kangaroos for many days and finally, I saw them and also, touched them the kangaroos. But, it was not only a very good experience as ... because of the kangaroos was they have a very strong smell. always.. I gave many experiments. My dear friends, I always try new things in my life (I always experiment with my life). So, these days, I am happy.

My diary check please!!

Today I had a English test. but.. I don't get a good score..
the test is not difficult.. I had a many mistakes... but i have many mistake
I should have been a litte little more carefully.. but I didn't do it...

last weekend I went to Caversham Wildlife Park with my school friends..
it was the zoo... I saw many animals in Wildlife Park..
kangaroos, koalas, many kinds of birds .... etc....
I want to see the kangaroos.. finally I saw and touched the kangaroos...
but.. it was not only  good... because of the kangaroos was have a strong smell..
always.. I gave many I always try many experiments.. so these days, I am happy ..