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My second poem, yet again it is sad :'( I’ve made a mistake By loving you Oh these memories Now pierce me deep inside I remember it all How I committed a sin By giving you my heart Why did you do all this? If only I could’ve asked Now everything is ruined A life not worth living And I am told to try So another one like you Can break my heart You were my only hope The only light in my life And now I hate to say How my state is like without you I try to smile But these dry lips are thirsty For the happiness But it is impossible Because you are not here I know I deserve all this All this loneliness All this pain After all it was my mistake For loving you.... :'(

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Thank you Raj Meena :)
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Cool....nice one dear...:))
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Yeah I am stronger than I used to be :)
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Oh ! You will be braver after all the pains, I think so ,and it always work to me :P
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Hey Dannifier,, and no its not for him. Its just the pain all put together and it creates this! I havent found him yet to be betrayed or heartbroken..:P

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