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SHOKO's notebook entry: Aug 09, 2010 I play a lot during summer vacation. It swam every day when it was a university student. The practice was terrible and severe. I want to go the friend and to play this year. I like to move the body. For instance, I like to walk tennis and swimming. It goes fishing. It meets papa who lives in Tokyo. Japan is very hot. It comes whether it is a lot every day as for the sweat. How does you spend the rest?

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SHOKO's notebook entry: Aug 09, 2010

I played a lot during summer vacation.
It swam every day when it was a university student.
The practice was terrible and severe.

I want to go the a friend's and to play this year. (Better: I want to hang out with a/my friend/s this year/summer)
I like to move the/my body (Better: I like to be active;);
for instance, I like to walk, play tennis and swim and it goes fishing.

It meets my papa, who lives in Tokyo.

Japan is very hot.
It comes whether it is a lot every day as for the sweat. gomen, kore wa wakarimasen..- Better: Japan is hot, and i sweat alot every day. 

How does you spend the rest (better: how do you spend your vacation?) ?

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