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Feel the breeze Differet seasons have different smells,I like the smell of spring. The breeze come through the windows with fresh smell and humidity.This smell bring me back to the memory of my childood.In spring,I walked home along the road beside the river after primary school. The river is full of water,when the breeze come,i could smell the air with earth ,and I can see the water surface with wave crystalline light.Opposite the river,there is a boundless stretch of green field with paddy rice.It seems you can't see the end of the world.The sky is without any cloud,pure blue.The world is so simple, peace and comfortable.

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Feel the breeze

Different seasons have different smells. I like the smell of spring. The breeze comes through the windows with a fresh smell and the feel of humidity. This smell brings me back to the memory of my childood. In spring I walked home along the road beside the river after primary school. The river is full of water and when the breeze came i could smell the air mixed with the earth. I can see the water and crystalline waves in the light. Opposite the river there is a boundless stretch of green fields with rice paddies. It seems you can't see where it ends in the distance. The sky is without any clouds, pure and blue. The world is so simple, peaceful and comfortable.

[Well done. It's a very good description and very good use of English in this written passage.]

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