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Seoul's friends! Where are you?
Last Two weeks ago, I went to Seoul, Korea with my sister. We planned the trip by oursleves. Sice My sister had asked me not to change too much Korean won because she would be changed extra, so I followed her instructions and changed only Rm500. I thought it would be enough for me, but my idea is I was wrong.
Remember you're telling us a story about past events, so use past tense.
The trip was five days and four nights. When we reached the Incheon Airport, we went to the reception counter to rent a portable wifi, it's which cost 8 USD per day. The wifi was very easy to use; what all you need to do is recharge the battery every day and put it inside your bag, then you can use it for nine hours continuously.
Then We checked in at Fraser Palace Hotel. It is just located in front of the City Hall in Seoul. Compared to Malaysia, I think that South Korea's traffic is really advanced. By subway, you can go anywhere in Seoul and not need wait for a long time.
I fully agree; and it's so stable!
The places I have visited in Seoul included Gyeongbukgong, Myeungdong, Naemdaemun, Hello Kitty Cafe, Lotte Mart and so on. In Myeungdong, I was able to find out many shops that sold clothes and beauty products. Here, I spent three-quarters of my money on such things. The rest of the money went to all my dinners money and transportation money for the whole trip.
I rewrote a little to make the sentences run more smoothly.
On the last day, I didn't have enough money for shopping in the Lotte Duty Free Shop at Incheon Airport. I I missed out on a lot of things. On the way home, I felt very sad and regretted that I had not followed my sister's instructions. I should have exchanged more money and go before I went. When I got home, I prepared souvenirs for my family members and friends. At that time, I realised that I had not bought anything for myself except a pack of moistened tissues with a Hello Kitty logo on it, and some lips balm.
Could any italki friend in Seoul can help me with buying things in Seoul, and post them to me? Please leave a comment for me if you can. I will send the money to you. I would appreciate your help very much. Thank you.
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