她為甚麼還不恨我?
我以為我同有人鬥嘴了, 但她現在表現的好像我們是更好的好友. 她以前非常憤怒的, 今天談我真高興了. 可能就我對她憤怒, 可能她沒知道. 我以前想她嘗試操縱我, 還可能.
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第一，说明你们“斗嘴”时你生气的程度很小，小到那个女孩根本没有发觉你的“愤怒”。
第二，这次冲突以后，经过很好的沟通，你们的感情反而比以前变得更好了。
第三，你误会那个女孩想“操纵”你，我猜这个女孩可能是你现在或将来的约会的对象，哈哈，我说的对吗？
第四，帮你修改作文的朋友给你提用双语书写的建议，希望你会看到，别人对你小作文作的评论，希望你会给回馈（作出反应）。
第五，内容写得很好，希望你以后写更多。
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Hey Collin, you know what, to maintain a relationship is not easy and it's all about give and take.
She probably just wanna find a way out in that an embarrassing situation. This time, she gives.
Think positively, man!
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Hey, I can't correct yr writing and i m gonna help it make over. I ll try to point out some usages. There are way too much Chinese rule so I can't really go through all of them with you here.
#1 I thought I was fighting with someone, but now she's acting like nothing happened.
我認為我跟某人吵架了，但她現在的表現像什麼也沒發生一般。
# 2 I was pretty sure she was overtly angry with me, but today she seemed happy to talk to me.
我非常肯定她是惱我的，但她今天卻看似很開心地跟我談話。
It's like she didn't even know I was angry at her, let alone that she was mad at me.
這就像她从不知道我惱過她，任由她惱我。
I suspect she's just trying to manipulate me somehow...
我懷疑她好像在控制我......
#1 fight with someone
跟某人吵架
i think "fight" here is 吵架 or 鬧彆扭
鬥嘴 is used to describe the situation what a child has a fight with parents
#2 She seemed happy to talk to me
= she talked to me happily
-adverd in chinese is XX地
-talk to someone 跟某人說話、談話
talk to me 跟我說話、談話
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I thought I was fighting with someone, but now she's acting like nothing happened.
我認為我跟她吵架了，但她現在的表現像什麼也沒發生一般。
I was pretty sure she was overtly angry with me, but today she seemed happy to talk to me.
我非常肯定她是惱我的，但她今天卻看似很開心地跟我談話。
It's like she didn't even know I was angry at her, let alone that she was mad at me.
這就像她从不知道我惱過她，任由她惱我。
I suspect she's just trying to manipulate me somehow...
我懷疑她好像在控制我......
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她為甚麼還不恨我?
我以為我同有人鬥嘴了, 但她現在表現的好像我們是更好的好友. 她以前非常憤怒的, 今天談我真高興了. 可能就我對她憤怒, 可能她沒知道. 我以前想她嘗試操縱我, 還可能.
她為甚麼還不恨我?
我以為我和朋友鬥嘴了, 但看她的表現 , 好像我們的友情比以往更好, 她以前會非常憤怒, 今天我們談過後, 我很高興, 可能她不知道我生過她的氣, 我以前想, 她可能想要控制我.
有人 = 友人 (friend ?
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