Corrections · 4
release --- 釋放
When I was standing on the top of a mountain, all I can thought could think was that we're were so small in compared to the Earth. To be a Being human, we're emotional, we have to fight and experience our life. But there's no need to fear and hide from it, just embrace comfort and pain. Be stronger!
Very good English, and an excellent message.
"When I was standing on the top of mountain,"
应该改为:“When I was standing on top of a mountain."
"all I can thought was we were so small in the earth."
应该改为:“all I could think was we are so small in the earth."
"To be a human,we are emotional,we have to fight and experience our life."
应该改为:“As humans, we are emotional beings. We have to fight through difficulties, and experience our life。“
“No need to fear and hide it,just embrace comfort and pain. Be stronger ! “
应该改为:“There is no need for fear or insecurity. Both comfort and pain should be embraced. I must be stronger!"
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