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Help me with my essay What Might be done to Reduce Smoking among Young people? Over the last years, smoking became the biggest problems among young people. Almost everyone knows that smoking causes cancer, heart disease; that smoking can shorten your life, but people are not afraid to start and injure themselves. So what can be done to reduce smoking among young people? The situation could be improved if parents speak about the risks of tobacco and must not smoke next to children. If they see that their parents are smoking and not speaking about it, they think that is normal behavior and may start smoking, therefore, it is necessary to show a good example. Secondly, it will help, if children could hear a lecture about smoking primarily from the doctor than from a friend, who tried it. Providing that they learn about illness caused by smoking, the result will be a decrease in number of smokers, because they will think "is it worth it?" After hearing the lecture children should play sports or another activity. It is necessary, because sports help build self-esteem, confidence, and social skills. Then people smoking, they feel that it is hard to breath, heart beats are faster than normal and they quickly get tired for this reason athletes do not smoking. In this way, children would know about smoking damage and would not try it. In conclusion, there are several ways in which we can attempt to reduce smoking among young people. By doing this, we will help protect young people's health and make our planet a more pleasant and clear place to live in.

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What Might be done to Reduce Smoking among Young people?

Over the last years, smoking has become one of the biggest problems among young people.
Almost everyone is aware that smoking can cause cancer and heart disease thus shortening the lifespan, but people are not afraid of these risks. So what can be done to reduce smoking among young people?
The situation might be improved if the parents speak about the risks of tobacco. They should also avoid smoking near their children thus giving a good example. If the children see their parents smoking, they would think that it is normal behavior and may start smoking.

 

Secondly it would help if children are lectured by a doctor about smoking. Providing that they learn about illness caused by smoking, the result will be a decrease in number of smokers, because they would think more about the disadvantage of smoking.
The children should also be involved in sports. It is necessary because sports help build self-esteem, confidence, and social skills. On the other hand people who smoke find it hard to breath, have faster heart beats and they quickly get tired. For this reason most of the athletes do not smoke. Like this, children would be aware of how much damage smoking does and hopefully would refrain from trying it.
There are several ways in which we can attempt to reduce smoking among young people. By doing this, we will be helping to protect young people's health and make our planet a more pleasant and cleaner place to live in.

 

 

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