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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Oh,it's a little different from the compositions I have ever write in the test.Because the tests always let us to talk about other things like school,the society,and other people like our friends,our family,our teachers……but never introduce myself~It's interesting yes? And,first like orthers , my English name is Yolanda,My boy friend said that the meaning of Yolanda is fit to my temperament,even though I don't know which kind of temperament I have in my own mind.I'm from China,a colorful and mysterious country.About two weeks ago,I got 18 years old,a real adult.In the year of coming,is really really important to me and the students at a same age of me,We will no games,no entertain,little rest,and go to school at 6:30 and back home at10 or later.Only to study harder and harder……for our future ,our dream…… My English is poor,but I like to speak English.I don't like study English grammer.because they are boring and I can't really undersand them . I really hope,one day ,I could study well and enjoy English ,just like when I was speak mother tongue~ I hope to make more foreign friends,so I can't without pretty good English skills. Life just for achieve out dream angain and angain with happiness right?Maybe,I just a "Daydreaming Girl" like this I think ,but I'm happy!~

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Oh, it's a little different from the compositions I have ever had to write in a the test. Because the tests always let us to talk about other things like school, the society and other people like our friends,our family,our teachers……but never introductions myself~It's interesting, yes?

And,first Like orthers, my English name is Yolanda. My boyfriend said that the meaning of Yolanda is fit to my temperament, even though I don't know which kind of temperament I have in my own mind.I'm from China,a colorful and mysterious country.About two weeks ago,I got 18 years old,a real adult.In the year of coming,is really really important to me and the students at a same age of me,We will no games,no entertain,little rest,and go to school at 6:30 and back home at10 or later.Only to study harder and harder……for our future ,our dream……
My English is poor,but I like to speak English.I don't like study English grammer.because they are boring and I can't really undersand them .
I really hope,one day ,I could study well and enjoy English ,just like when I was speak mother tongue~ I hope to make more foreign friends,so I can't without pretty good English skills.

Life just for achieve out dream angain and angain with happiness right?Maybe,I just a "Daydreaming Girl" like this I think ,but I'm happy!~

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* Oh, it's a little different from the compositions I have ever had to write in a test. Because tests always talk about other things like school, society and people like our friends, family, and teachers but, never self introductions ~interesting, yes? 

 Like others, my English name is Yolanda.

---Notes:

1. Boyfriend is a boy you are dating

If he is a friend that is a boy then there is no need to use an adjective ('boy') because 'friend' is genderless. It is neither masculine nor feminine. 

2. Using a comma. Omit the space after the previous word. It makes it easier to read. 

  Example:

 Correct:  "I have an apple, an orange, a banana and grapes."

 Incorrect:  "I have an apple , an orange , a banana and grapes."

         

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