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In my stance我不知道你用得对不对,能不能告诉我你哪里看到这么用的,我查过BBC和VOA,好像没见过这么用的。
Because of the possibility of bringing some troubles, people are afraid of helping strangers. Nowadays, some people are unwilling to give strangers hands, which makes the(冠词不能错,不然以后后患无穷) society more cold. However, as far as I'm concerned, helping is always the good thing if it is not beyond your ability.
First, helping strangers is good for building up the harmony of social atmosphere. Without generousity and kindness, people would become more cold-blooded(论证不到位,他不是高尚的人,所以他就应该被枪毙). Second, giving hands to strangers not only saves then out of trouble, but also makes yourself feel happy and sacrify(?). This is beneficial to your character. What's more, caring about strangers can let everybody knows(let ... knows) that each of our citizens has duty to help. If you watch someone in trouble, you couldn't avoid your face to them(???), it will go against your conscience.
In my stance, everyone wants to live in a harmonious society which is filled with love. Helping strangers is a good thing for us to pursuit.
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