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Should We Help Strangers? (Topic's tips: Helping strangers used to be considered as a virtue. But nowadays people tend to be very cautious of strangers. They are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring them trouble. What's your opinion?) Because of the possibility of bringing some troubles, people are afraid of helping strangers. Nowadays, some people are unwilling to give strangers hands that makes society more cold. However, as far as I'm concerned, helping is always the good thing if it were not beyond your ability. First, helping strangers is good for build up the harmony of social atmosphere. Without help and kindness, people would become more cold-blooded. Second, giving hands to strangers not only to save then out of trouble, but making yourself feel happy and sacrify. This is beneficial to your character. What's more, caring about strangers can let everybody knows that each of our citizens has duty to help. If you watch someone in trouble, you couldn't avoid your face to them, it will go against your conscience. In my stance, everyone wants to live in a harmony society which is filled with love. Helping strangers is a good thing for us to pursuit.

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In my stance我不知道你用得对不对,能不能告诉我你哪里看到这么用的,我查过BBC和VOA,好像没见过这么用的。

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I never trust strangers . some people just want to make you a ladder and make progress then simply leave you alone . so I'd rather to trust nobody
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i was once afraid of strangers too. it was before i have a passion on traveling. but one day, when i went on a vacation with a friend of mine, suddenly a bad situation that we never imagine came up, and we were afraid. somehow there were strangers that helped us up from the situation and then i learnt that sometimes strangers are just friends we never meet yet. anyway, the best suggestion i could give when you feel hesitate to help strangers is : follow your heart. if you feel it safe and you feel happy to help, just help. but if you feel like they are dangerous for you, just leave.
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这个题目难写,首先,他把你道德绑架了,你绝对不能用反方观点。然而用正方观点,你会发现,根本就没有合理的理由去论证。只能用空洞的大话,这个绝对就是比拼语言了。
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Because of the possibility of bringing some troubles, people are afraid of helping strangers. Nowadays, some people are unwilling to give strangers hands, which makes the(冠词不能错,不然以后后患无穷) society more cold. However, as far as I'm concerned, helping is always the good thing if it is not beyond your ability.
First, helping strangers is good for building up the harmony of social atmosphere. Without generousity and kindness, people would become more cold-blooded(论证不到位,他不是高尚的人,所以他就应该被枪毙). Second, giving hands to strangers not only saves then out of trouble, but also makes yourself feel happy and sacrify(?). This is beneficial to your character. What's more, caring about strangers can let everybody knows(let ... knows) that each of our citizens has duty to help. If you watch someone in trouble, you couldn't avoid your face to them(???), it will go against your conscience.
In my stance, everyone wants to live in a harmonious society which is filled with love. Helping strangers is a good thing for us to pursuit.

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