NOTE!

(This is an exercise of note from my TEM-4 exercise, please help me to correct my grammar and polish it. Thanks!Here's the requestion:One of your foreign friends Ann plans to go sightseeing in China. You have just come back from a place which you think she might enjoy. Write a note to advise her to go to thins place. )

Dear Ann,
I'm so excited to recommend to you a amazing place to visit. As you known, I've been to Beijing and it really impressed me. The Summer Palace, the Great Wall, the brillant traditional gardens,it's awesome! And the people there are very nice. Beijing is the mirror (?) of Chinese traditional culture. I believe that you will like its atmosphere. Wherever you go, I hope you will have a enjoyable journey in China.
Yours
Cone

NOTE!

(This is an exercise of note from my TEM-4 exercise, please help me to correct my grammar and polish it. Thanks!Here's the requestion:One of your foreign friends Ann plans to go sightseeing in China. You have just come back from a place which you think she might enjoy. Write a note to advise her to go to thins place. )

Dear Ann,
I'm so excited to recommend you an amazing place to visit. As you known, I've been to Beijing and it really impressed me.The Summer Palace, the Great wall, the brillant traditional gardens,it's awesome(这句句子不对，自己读读，很明显的错误)!And （信件，不是口语，可以用besides，moreover等）the people in there is very nice. Beijing is the mirror（不知道这么比喻对不对，见到过Native这么用吗？没见过最好别发明创造。） of Chinese traditional culture. I believed that you will like the atmosphere of it. Wherever you go, I hope you will have a enjoyable journey in China. （注意你的标点前后的空格，把它放进word，你会知道错在哪里的）
Yours
Cone