First notebook entry: Introducing myself
hello everyone.My Chinese full name is Hu Xueying.But you can call me Zoe.I live in Shanghai.It's a moden city,beautiful and awosome.
Let me talk about why to learn Engilsh.I never went away to abroad in the past time.But I always have a dream which I must be improve myself.I must be go abroad.So I am ready prove myself.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hello, everyone. My Chinese full name is Hu Xueying, but you can call me Zoe. I live in Shanghai. It's a modern city, beautiful and awesome.
Let me talk about explain why I want to learn English. I never went away to abroad in the past time. I've never been abroad, but I've always have had a dream which I must be to improve myself. I must be go abroad. So I am ready to prove myself.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hello everyone. My Chinese full name is Hu Xueying.But you can call me Zoe.I live in Shanghai.It's a modern city,beautiful and awesome.
Let me talk about why I want to learn English.I never been abroad.But I always have a dream of improving myself.I must be go abroad.So I am ready to prove myself.
很好! 加油 ：）
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Hi Zoe , nice to see ur enthusiasm and i must say u look very determined to learn english , As a matter of fact ur half way there , its just that u need to work on ur grammer a bit and keep up the good work
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