First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Except Chinese , I think that English is the most beautiful language , just like peaceful songs sung from lips . I just love it for no reason and hold the pure wish to learn and speak it better .
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well , thank you . when i wrote it , i just couldnt pick the word desire up from my memory . kind of stupid . aha....~~
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What you've written is almost like a poem, so I am reluctant to tell you to change anything. You might be interested to know that I think most English speakers would be more likely to say "a pure desire" than "the pure wish". But that doesn't make your wording incorrect.
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