First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hello everybody , Today is sunny in my hometown . I'm a Chinese girl , 17-year-old . I study English , because I'm interested in it . I hope I can get a good r

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hello everybody , Today is sunny in my hometown . I'm a Chinese girl , 17-year-old . I study English , because I'm interested in it . I hope I can get a good result , please help me . Thanks ~

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello everybody. Today is sunny in my hometown. I'm a Chinese girl, 17-years old. I study English_because I'm interested in it. I hope I can get a good result, please help me.

Thanks ~

Put the punctuation right after the word, then leave a space. Otherwise, this is excellent.

欢迎！Welcome!

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