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graduate=unemployment I'm a Chinese girl.I graduated immediately.But the work is hard in China.I hope to that the work is interesting.But no stay in a fixed place every day and repetitive work.My parents urges me to make married,because I'm old and spinster.I'm crazy!I'm only 25 years.I am younger.DEPRESS

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I can understand probably.We hope that the life is full of freshing and challenging everyday.At the same time ,Ican make new friends with every day.Thank you for your advice
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graduate = unemployment

- Graduated = Unemployed (or unemployment)

 

I'm a Chinese girl. I graduated immediately.

- I've just graduated or I've graduated recently

 

But the work is hard in China.

But working (or to find a job?!) is hard in China. (use THE when you are talking about a particular job)

 

I hope to that the work is interesting.

- I hope that my job be interesting. (you should use job here)

 

But no stay in a fixed place every day and repetitive work.

- But I don't like to go to a constant place and do the same things everyday

- But not a job that makes me stay in a constant place for everyday and do some repetetive work. (You should explain and don't be afraid if it makes the text longer)

 

My parents urges me to make married,because I'm old and spinster.

- My parents insist on me to marry (or to get married) because I'm mature (or old enough; you are not old, you are adult or old enough for marriage) and single. (spinster is an old-fashioned word)

 

I'm crazy!I'm only 25 years.I am younger.DEPRESS

- You can just say: I'm 25. Or if you want to say it formally it will be: I'm 25 years old.

- I am young. Depressed.

 

Good luck with your English.

Also your job and other stuffs.

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Hey Chinese girl! Hey Lily. If it helps, after my graduation I was unemployed for more then a year. Then I got a sort of experience job that paid me about the same as the unemployment benefit. It was awfully depressing, and it seemed all my days and nights that I studied were for nothing. I still hate Human Resource people because of this. They always said their impression or the way smile and walk is more important in their decision to hire you, that all the qualifications you worked on for years. But after two years I got my first real job, and I have only been a month out of work since. I am 46 now. By the way, if I meet a girl, in a bar, we talk, and she says she works for HR, I 'go to toilet' and never come back. I hope this helps.

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