The story of my cat

I want to write some thing about my cat. Actually it's not my cat, about five years ago, my former colleague found a little Persian cat at our company, so he took it back to his dorm and fed it every day. However as this cat grew bigger and was not cute any more, he abandoned it.

He told me when the cat was little, was quiet and lovely, I guess that's why people call it kitten.When I found it three years ago, what I  saw was a dirty, skinny, old hobo. Our company is  located in a suburban area that has a huge yard and some wild cats live here. I have seen this cat join in many cat fights. Usually when a pretty female cat shows up, two male cats will start yelling at each other, it takes a few minutes, then one of them will back off like a coward and this Persian cat always is the one.

Fortunately everyone like it, we feed it once in a while so it won't die of starvation. We call it "Loser", it has a good childhood, never worries about food, but is now facing the savage cats' world just like us.

Every day when I arrived at my company I will check on  Loser to see if it's still alive. When I'm on my shift, I will share my food with it. Once I took it home, I wanted to take care of it like a pet, it hid under my bed for two days  and never came out. When I put some cat food on the ground it just used its little claw to grab it.

I told myself to be patient with it,  that it should take a while for it to adjust a new place. Then I smelled the poo under my bed. Finally I lost my temper, I grabbed a mop, kicked it out of my bed and sent it back to my company.

Now it is still living in the yard, every morning it will show up at the door, eat some thing, then take a nap in our room. When we go home , it disappears too. That is Loser, a homeless cat and my friend.

  Overall, a good effort.   Please be aware that the name of a person , animal, place or thing has a capital letter because it is a proper noun. Use the past tense when talking about thing sthat happened in the past. Use a new paragrapgh for every new idea. By the way,  I  have 2 cats and adore them.