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How long do you sleep? I usually sleep at 1:00 a.m. and get off of a bed at 8:00. Surprisingly, for me, no matter how tired I am, or how lately I go to bed, or how perfectly healthy situation I have, everyday I precisely sleep for seven hours a day before my eyes open. I don't understand why my body always needs to sleep for seven hours but I figure it is just my own bodily mechanism so as to prepare for next day. Sometimes when I am extremely busy, I eagerly desire to shorten my length of sleeping time in order to get more daytime but I've failed whenever I tried. How many hours do you sleep a day? More or less than seven hours?

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How long do you sleep?

I usually go to sleep at 1:00 a.m. and get off out of a bed at 8:00.
Surprisingly, for me, no matter how tired I am, or how lately I go to bed, or how perfectly healthy situation I have, everyday I precisely sleep for precisely seven hours a day before my eyes open.

I don't understand why my body always needs to sleep for seven hours but I figure it is just my own bodily mechanism so as to preparing for the next day.

Sometimes when I am extremely busy, I eagerly desire want to shorten my length of sleeping time in order to get more daytime but I've failed whenever I tried.

Sometimes when I am extremely busy, I don't want to lose daylight by sleeping but whenever I try to wake up earlier it doesn't work
 
How many hours do you sleep a day? More or less than seven hours?

 

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That picture is awesome!
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Well, I don't think I could correct this but, let me tell you my answer :D I sleep less than you do. I can sleep 2 hours in a day, if I'm extremely busy :/.. I sleep around 12 am and wake up around 5 am. If I don't have any schedule to go campus I'll sleep again until 7am but I hardly do this. So, thats about it.
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Really want to get corrections, more natural expressions, suggestions, etc!

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