I was busy these days, because I will have two important examinations in next months, and also I have another test in June, God! So I was busy to study all the time, even I didn't go to supermarket to buy some stuffs, and I've been a long time not buy clothes. :( But I don't care very much. The matter is I didn't studying English so long ago. It is right it should be that my bad English, then now I don't have time to practice. So I realized that I forgot all of English.

我的小小建议是，首先，你的时态，开头就i was busy,马上就will了……

还有，就是我想讨论一下这段的逻辑感，我们知道，在好的英语作文和中文作文里，在一切英语作文考试里，说话有条理和逻辑感是很重要的。

分析一下，你的中心思想是，我很忙，对吧？那么So I realized that I forgot all of English.在这段里，就应该删掉了。

你为什么忙，一要考试，二在复习中还要忙里偷闲做家务，比如到超市购物。那么你就应该分先后陈述你的忙的表现。同时，你最好躲在文章中用一些关联词，从而让读者好理解。

我来班门弄斧不自量力一下哦。

I am busy these days. I will take two important examinations next month,(没有in) and my English is poor. In order to get a higher mark in the comming two examinations, I have to spend a lot of time in studying English. Besides, I have to do a lot of housework such as shopping, cleaning the rooms and teaching my kid. It really takes me a lot of time to go to supermarkets to buy stuffs.

或许语言还可以更好一点，或许我也犯了很多错误。或许还可以更充实一下内容。但我个人认为，这样的语言组织要比原先的第一段要好。

My recent life

I am busy these days, because I will have two important examinations in the next month, and also I have another test in June, God! So I was busy to studying all the time, even I didn't even go to supermarket to buy some stuff, and I've it has been a long time since buying clothes. :( But I don't care very much. The matter is I didn't study English so very long ago. It is alright it that my Englsih should be bad, then now I didn't have time to practice. So I realized that I forgot all of my English.
Another reason, I gave up a good job--- Stewardess. So I need not study English hard for the work. And I can have free time to prepare my studies. I know it's a pity. Stewardess is my dream, always. Maybe many people know that to be a stewardess is a difficlut thing, of course in China. And many people asked me why I did made this decision. I know, this may be my last chance to become a flight attendant. And it's a great job for so many girls: beautiful appearance, a decent salary, good benefits, etc. It's really hard to make a descision. But "Grasp all, lose all". Let me tell you the reason.
First, I think that I am a bit old to have the job. Secondly, I have to attend the training of the Airline in April. That means I won't enjoy my college life in the last month, I really love and miss my schooltime, even now while I am in my university. I don't want to lose the best time soon. Thirdly, is I think stewardess' life is not regular, and I want  to Iiving live a stable life. And if I am a stewardess, I will stay away from my parents, I must be worried worry if my parents will be in good condition. They will get older and older, they will need that I can me to often go see them. The important reason, I found that to become a teacher is more suitable for me. I like children, I love to do everything with kids. So I realized if I could be with children in my life, that would be the happiest thing for me.
I hope I can it will be good to be a teacher, I will try my best!!!!

My recent life

I was I've been busy these days, because I will have two important examinations in the next few months, and also I have another test in June, God! So I was I've been busy to studying all the time,. even I didn't go I haven't even gone to supermarket to buy some stuffs, and I've been a long time not buy clothesI haven't bought clothes for a long time. :( But I don't care very much. The matter problem is I didn't studying hadn't studied English for so longso long ago. It is right it should be that my bad English, then now I don't have time to practice. It is no surprise that my English had gotten worse, and now I don't have time to practice. So I realized that I forgot all of English.
Another reasonIn addition, I gave up a good job---being a stewardess. So I need not now I don't need to study English hard for the workmy future career. And I can have free time to prepare for my exams my studies. I know it's a pity. Being a stewardess had always been my dream. is my dream, always. Maybe many people know that to be a stewardess is a difficlut thing, of course in China. And many people asked me why I did made this decision. I know, this may be my last chance to become a flight attendant. And it's a great job for so many girls: beautiful appearance, a decent salary, good benefits, etc. It's really hard to make a descision. But "Grasp all, lose all". Let me tell you the reason.
First, I think that I am a bit old to have the job. Secondly, I have to attend the training of the Airline airline training in April. That's means I won't enjoy the last month of my college life. in the last month, I really love and miss my schooltime school days, even now while I am still in my university. I don't want to lose miss out on the best times so soon. Thirdly, is I think stewardess' life is not regular stable, and I want to live Iiving a stable life. And if I am a stewardess, I will stay away live apart from my parents, and I must be worried if will worry whether they are in good health my parents be in good condition. They will be older and older, they need that I can me to often go to see them. The most important reason is that I found that to become a teacher is more suitable for me. I like children, I love to do everything with kids. So I realized if I could work with children in my life, that's would be the happiest thing for me.
I hope I can will be good enough to be a teacher. I will try my best!!!!

You'll be a great teacher! Good luck on your tests!