First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello!
My name is Catherine.
I'm from Guangdong which is a beautiful province.
I'm a strange girl in daily life.
On the one hand,
paying attention to my best friends in some ways with my laughter.
On the other hand ,
I'm a silent girl before strangers.
 Sometimes,I like apples and bananas.
Besides,it's important for me to take some exercises.
Because heathy is everything.
Actually,I don't know how to improve my English really,
I will try my best to learn it well.
Please believe in me.
Thanks.

Well done, you have a relatively good basic. 

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello!
My name is Catherine.
I'm I come from Guangdong, which is a beautiful city.
It's a strange girl for me in daily life.
On the one hand,
I pay attention to my best friends in some ways with my laughter.
On the other hand,
I'm a silent girl before the in front of strangers.
Sometimes, I like apples and bananas.
Besides,it's important for me to take do some exercises.
Because the heathy is the money.
Actually, I don't know how to improve my English really,
I will try my best to learn it well.
Please believe me.
Thanks.

Good job!

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello!
My name is Catherine.
I'm I come from Guangdong province, which is a beautiful city place.
It's a strange girl for me in daily life. I am a little bit different from other girls in my age. From one aspect ,改不下去了。。。paying attention to my best friends in some ways with my laughter.
On the other hand ,
I'm a silent girl before the strangers.
In some times,I like apples and bananas.
Besides,it's important for me to take some exercises.
Because the heathy is the money.
Actually,I don't know how to inprove my English really,
I will try my best to learn it well.
Please believe me.
Thanks.