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About Hawaii I went to Hawaii November of last year. Then I like Hawaii. Why I like Hawaii because It has a slow pace of life. That's what I like. I want to go to Hawaii again sometime.

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About Hawaii

I started to like Hawaii after I went there last November. The reason why I like Hawaii is because the slow pace of life. I want to be there again sometime in future.

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About Hawaii

I went to Hawaii last November. 
I like it there because of its slow pace of life.  
I would like to go again sometime in the future. 

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About Hawaii

I went to Hawaii November of last year.
Then I like Hawaii.
Why I like Hawaii because It has a slow pace of life. That's what I like.
I want to go to Hawaii again sometime.

 

 

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I did not know it. Have you been to Hawaii?
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Actually, Hawaii is not a beautiful city. Few people like it, you should haven't gone to Hawaii if you had known other beautiful city, most of people are living in Hawaii are not warm-hearted, now matter how you should choose other city to travel.

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