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Class Prophecy part 1 (please correct my grammar) “Our dreams and visions of today will shape our tomorrow’s future”. This is the most remarkable message that I will never forget for my entire life. These words give me a flashback of that unforgettable day, the day when I experienced a glimpse of the future. It was a weird morning when I passed along the school library. I had no plan of entering the library but a strange feeling crept over me, as if something urged me to go inside. And I did. As I rummage around for some random books in the shelves, I found this mysterious book which looks exceptional from the others. It looked like some kind of futuristic thing which we can only see in sci-fi movies. The book has no title written on its cover, but when I opened it I found a swirl optical illusion image attached on the page. For a moment I stared perplexedly and seemed to be hypnotized for a few seconds. To cut this disturbing atmosphere, I rushed out the library. As I opened the door of the room, I was astonished to see that everything has transformed instantly into a different world. I knew in my mind that I was still in Romblon National High School; however the place seemed to be very different. The windows, the ceilings, walls, doors, everything has changed. The school looked like a newly constructed one. Everything was modernized and technologically advanced. They even had touch screen wall- mounted computers along the halls of the building. Out of mystification, I decided to see the school head, Mrs. Belinda Mendoza. I was shocked upon entering her office because I discovered that the school head was no longer her. The new school head stood up and greeted me as if she knew me very well. It took me a while to realize that the lady in front of me is my classmate, April Joy Ganan. This made me even more confused about what is really happening. Then I tried to glance at the calendar mounted on the wall. My eyeballs almost detach from my eyes when I found out that I was in year 2024. Realizing that I was time warped to the future, I decided not to tell April anymore. I knew that if I would tell her about this, she might assume that I was just getting crazy.

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Class Prophecy part 1 (please correct my grammar)

“Our dreams and visions of today will shape our tomorrow’s future”. This is the most remarkable message that I will never forget for the rest of my life. These words give me a flashback of that unforgettable day, the day when I experienced a glimpse of the future.
It was a weird morning when I passed along the school library. I had no plan of entering the library but a strange feeling crept over me, as if something urged me to go inside. And I did. As I rummaged around for some random books on the shelves, I found this mysterious book which looked exceptional from the others. It looked like some kind of futuristic thing which we would only see in sci-fi movies. The book had no title written on its cover, but when I opened it I found a swirl optical illusion image attached on the page. For a moment I stared perplexedly and seemed to be hypnotized for a few seconds. To cut this disturbing atmosphere, I rushed out of the library.
As I opened the door of the room, I was astonished to see that everything had transformed instantly into a different world. I knew in my mind that I was still in Romblon National High School; however the place seemed to be very different. The windows, the ceilings, walls, doors, everything had changed. The school looked newly constructed. Everything was modernized and technologically advanced. They even had touch screen wall-mounted computers along the halls of the building.
Out of mystification, I decided to see the school head, Mrs. Belinda Mendoza. I was shocked upon entering her office because I discovered that she was no longer the school head. The new school head stood up and greeted me as if she knew me very well. It took me a while to realize that the lady in front of me was my classmate, April Joy Ganan. This made me even more confused about what was really happening. Then I tried to glance at the calendar mounted on the wall. My eyeballs almost detached from my eyes when I found out that I was in the year 2024. Realizing that I was time warped into the future, I decided not to tell April. I knew that if I were to tell her about this, she might assume that I was going crazy.

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