Beijing,I'm coming I'm?going?to?Beijing?next?monday.I'm?very?excited.?It?is?first?time?that?I?will?leave?my?home?town.From?child?to?now,I?have?a?dream?taht?I?want?to?travel?all?provinces?in?China.Now?

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Beijing,I'm coming I'm?going?to?Beijing?next?monday.I'm?very?excited.?It?is?first?time?that?I?will?leave?my?home?town.From?child?to?now,I?have?a?dream?taht?I?want?to?travel?all?provinces?in?China.Now?the?chance?is?coming.First?province?is?Beijing.

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that ~ THE first province will be better in the last sentence .. try to put in some other word instead WILL . ~ anyway , wish you a nice journey ~

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