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I AM AN ENGLISH MAJOR UNIVERSITY STUDENTA.I AM A GIRL .I LIKE TRAVELING AND LISTENING MUSIC WHICH CAN BOTH ENRICH MY DAILY LIFE. AT PRESENT ,I HAVE PASSED CET 6 TEST . MY PROBLEM LIES ON ORAL ENGLISH .MY ORAL ENGLISH IS VERY POOR .I DON'T WANT TO BE A "DUMB ENGLISH SPEAKER ".SO I WANT TO FIND A FRIEND HERE WITH WHOM WE CAN IMPROVE OUR LANGUAGE ABILITY TOGETHER . I HOPE I AM LUCK ENOUGH TO MEET YOU ,MY DEAR FRIENDS!
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i just read the modify below ... i do agree the third neat problem ~~~ most ppl talk my friends or dear friends ~thats my monotonous if we meet them all the time .
well , i m just a junior in a university locate in Nanjing . i hope i can get of ur acquaitance :D
in addition , im not a english major fellow ~~~
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I am an English major university student. I'm a girl(1). I like travelling and listening to music, both of which enrich my daily life(2). I have passed (a/the/my) CET 6 test. My problem lies in oral (spoken) English. My spoken English is very poor. I don't want to be a "dumb English speaker", so I want to find a friend here with whom we can improve our language abilities together. I hope I am lucky enough to meet you, my dear friends!(3)
(1) "I'm female" sounds a bit better.
(2) "both of which enrich my daily life" - this is fine, but you could probably leave this out. Or you could say "I really enjoy travelling and listening to music - they make my life more enjoyable."
(3) A more commonly used expression would be: "I look forward to meeting you all!" We don't usually say "my friends" or "my dear friends" in natural spoken English.
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