Corrections · 9
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hi,this is Saori from Japan.
I want to study English because I like many kinds of movies which are recommended from America,England etc..and I also like music worldwide.
But I am not good at English.
So I want to make friends with whoever says high level English. What's more, languages from other countries can be learned if time is adequate for a conversation.
CORRECTION:
Hello, my name is Saori. I am from Japan. I want to study English because I like many movies from America and England that use the language. I also like many types of music from around the world. I would like to be able to understand English better as my skills are not great yet. I really want to make friends who can help me learn the language so we can talk back and forth.
Konichiwa!! Hajimemashite!! Watashi wa Misty desu. Amerika-jin desu. Watashi wa nijyuu ni sai desu. Yoroshiku onegaishimasu!! Ogenki desu ka?
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hi, I'm Saori, I'm from Japan.
I want to study English because I like many kinds of movies in America, England etc..and I also like music all over the world.
But I don't understand English very well.
So I want to make friends who talk in this language.
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hi, I'm Saori from Japan.
I want to study English because I like many kind of movies in from America,England etc..and I also like music in from all over the world.
But I don't understand English very well though.
So I want to make friends who talk eachother speak the language I'm learning.
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Your usually not supposed to begin a sentence with a conjuction (and, but, for, etc.). It's not a big deal though. Pretty much everyone does it anyways :P
A lot of the other corrections are over-correcting i think (and some of them using incorrect grammar unfortunately). This is why it's important to actually have an english teacher.
With the corrections I added, this is technically correct. It still seems kind of unnatural though. Here's how I would re-word what you were saying:
"Hello, I'm Saori from Japan. I'm studying english because of all the movies I like from America, England, etc.. I also like music from all over the world. I still don't understand English very well though. Because of that, I want to make friends to help me practice English."
I would suggest getting a real english teacher. You can technically learn english on the internet, but a lot of people either speak very improper english, or just use totally incorrect grammar.
Your english is actually really good though :) keep up the good work!
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