My dream
I really like to dream. I always have sweet dreams, you know. Recently, I dreamed about dating with my honey, a suprising gift he gave to me, and many romantic things like these. I awaked with a laugh sometimes. I don’t know why I dream about it, the baby things and domestic details fill our life now, we are so busy that we don’t have the world of husband and wife. However, in my heart I really wanna have the time which belongs to only two of us, so I should say :my dream comes ture in my “tream”
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My dream
I really like to dream. I always have sweet dreams, you know. Recently, I dreamed about a date with my honey, and his suprising gift that he gave to me, and many other romantic things like these. I awaked with a laugh sometimes. I don’t know why I dream about it, the baby things and domestic details fill our life now,and we are so busy that we don’t have time for each other. However, in my heart I really want to have some time which belongs to only two of us, so I should say :my dream comes true in my “dreams”
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I wish i could dream like that =D
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